Instructions: Please rewrite this paper provided to the point where you clarify the concept of “tech-savvy people” by specifying a certain group or type of user, as well as adding some context about why this is happening (e.g., privacy concerns, platform alternatives, etc.). Here’s how you can refine it:
Clarify the Population: Instead of using a vague term like “tech-savvy people,” you could specify the type of users (e.g., young professionals, developers, digital marketers, etc.).
Narrow the Reasoning: Rather than asking “why” in a broad sense, focus on specific factors driving this shift, such as privacy concerns, changes in user experience, or the rise of alternative platforms.
Simplify the Language: Use concise language to make the question more straightforward.
Here’s a more refined and simplified version:
“What factors are driving tech professionals to leave Facebook?”
Alternatively, if you want to focus on a particular aspect of the issue, you could specify:
“How are privacy concerns influencing tech-savvy users to leave Facebook?”
Both versions are more focused and clearer, allowing you to explore specific reasons behind the trend.